Raising The Fifth

The Garden of Remembrance

By Janina Aza Karpinska

She steadies the weight of corrugated iron

above the compost heap with upraised arm.

Her solid-limbed body – shapeless

in wedge-heeled shoes and grey shift dress.

Puts out tulips like the dying embers

of a wood-fire in suburbia;

adding to flower-cemetery’s final remains

the yellow iris, freesias and chrysanthemums;

seasons told by flower-stem

and stages of decomposition;

their brittle crisp-curled petals lace

the growing debris of domestic waste.

A daily ritual witnessed by a shock-limbed tree

that stands forever barren beside a thriving nursery.

About the Poem

“The Garden of Remembrance was something I wrote for my M.A. in Creative Writing & Personal Development inspired by ‘The Dustbin, Cookham’ – a painting by Stanley Spencer. In this poem, flowers are a place-holder for the beauty and colour of dreamed-of infants – dreams that fade and die, and have to be regularly replaced, making a compost heap a cemetery of lost dreams, ironically next to a thriving nursery – playing on the ‘loaded’ word ‘nursery’. The attempt to numb grief becomes a daily routine – in both cases. “

Award-winning poet, Janina Aza Karpinska, achieved an M.A. Creative Writing & Personal Development (with Merit) at Sussex University. Writing in many styles is a daily practice, with work published in: Three Drops From A CauldronEkphrastic ReviewIsacousticWillawaw JournalDrawn to the Light, and Poems in the Waiting Room among others.  

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